Haiku - My Morning Jacket style

Started by Tracy_3000, Nov 09, 2010, 11:11 AM

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Tracy 3000

Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. Usually they use simple words and grammar. The most common form for Haiku is three short lines. The first line contains 5 syllables, the second line 7 syllables, and the third line contains 5 syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme. A Haiku must "paint" a mental image in the reader's mind.

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Jim brings all his love, passion, energy and mystery to the stage and says, "I'm right here."

Tracy 3000


Steam Engine running
chugging a loving plugging
rails deep in my soul
Jim brings all his love, passion, energy and mystery to the stage and says, "I'm right here."

Crispy

They Will Sing You Songs
music thrums through your body
you will ache for more
"...it's gonna be great -- I mean me coming back with the band and playing all those hits again"

johnnYYac

Laser harp rises
Beats pulse as the singer smiles
I'm going to scream
The fact that my heart's beating is all the proof you need.

Tracy 3000

I'm going to hell
I think I'm going to hell
A race of robots
Jim brings all his love, passion, energy and mystery to the stage and says, "I'm right here."

Tracy 3000

I will sing you songs
I will be there when you die
Just because I do
Jim brings all his love, passion, energy and mystery to the stage and says, "I'm right here."

Bigsky

My Morning Jacket
I don't want to feel a thing
Make my face melt please

capt. scotty

       flying V face melts
constant streams of holy fuck
      i just bill murrayd
The thing is, Bob, it's not that I'm lazy, it's that I just don't care. - Peter Gibbons

capt. scotty

QuoteMy Morning Jacket
I don't want to feel a thing
Make my face melt please

damnit, you beat me to the face melt!
The thing is, Bob, it's not that I'm lazy, it's that I just don't care. - Peter Gibbons

Schmokenvontoken

Run Thru the Lowdown
I'M AMAZED, Look at You
Bermuda Highway


I don't mind that one part rhymed, it was the first thing I imagined when I thought of my MMJ Philosophy.
There will be Bigotry and Open Minds*
There will be days of Peace~
I hope you have the Time^

mahg33ta

the way that he sings
the best band you will ever see
all the proof you need


EasyRyder

anytime dancefloors
they beat for you all night long
let the fetus rock





"As citizens of eternity we ought to be without anxiety."

SaraBananaBear

Cosmic soul rebels
Ba-ba-bananas-na-nas
Come to Sweden soon


My apologies is I got the syllables thingy wrong, I'm foreign, I don't speak your language... much...  ;)
Europe ♥ My Morning Jacket

Crispy

QuoteCosmic soul rebels
Ba-ba-bananas-na-nas
Come to Sweden soon


My apologies is I got the syllables thingy wrong, I'm foreign, I don't speak your language... much...  ;)
Winner!
"...it's gonna be great -- I mean me coming back with the band and playing all those hits again"

lil sis

Moonlight shaky knees
Double rainbow all the way
Thoughts align in time
"There's still time for you to change your mind or whatever else you do."

Haldon

the lights are off now
their music is in my head
this is me complete

touchingmept2

Your ass draws me in
Take your money and your drugs
I could be your friend
The time is near, to come forward with whatever killed your spark.

scosby2

I needed it most
In a red patoka sea
Just because I do